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Post by ~*~WolfShadow~*~ on Feb 5, 2007 0:32:45 GMT -5
Death Whispers
Chapter One Deadly Love It was a dark day full of gray clouds that poured rain. I stood in the middle of my army’s territory kissing an enemy soldier of the opposite army. His arms were wrapped around me and mine on his shoulders. All I knew was that I was soaked to the bone , but I was kissing my true love……Zak. “ I love you Nick.” He said drawing away from my wet face. “ I love you too Zak.” I replied looking into his blue eyes. He ran his hand down my back. It gave me the chills. Before meeting Zak in a different country I had another love. His name was Jake we were married and had a son name Jamie, but that was in the past now. Now we were divorced and in the same army. I knew as well as any other that Jake still loved and cared for me, but I wasn’t the same way with him. I didn’t believe my feelings right then and there because I felt like something bad was going to happen. I ignored the feeling and leaned against Zak’s broad chest. That’s when it happened I heard a loud “BANG” and I fell onto Zak screaming. There was blood I could see and smell it, but worst of all I could feel it soaking into my shirt and pants. Zak’s lifeless eyes stared straight at me. I got up drew my dagger and looked to where the shot came from. There I saw Jake walking toward my hurt body. He was saying something but I was to furious to answer him. I began to charge at him only to be grabbed by Lutenent Gearheart and the rest of the platoon. “Let me go!” I screamed” I’ll murder him!” “Hold her tightly,” Gearheart yelled to his men” She must have suffered a knock to the head.” Jake stared at me in horror he was frozen to the spot. Moments later I broke free of Gearheart and the others once again I charged at Jake. This time Jake caught my wrists and held onto them. I dropped my dagger and began crying I fell to my knees. I could feel the cold muddy water going into my boots as I sat there sobbing in the rain. Jake gently picked my up and asked me if I was ok. “I’m ok.” I told him. “ Nick I love you.” He replied. “ I love you too…just don’t let me go.” I sobbed pushing my red face into his chest. He held onto me tighter and pulled me closer. I forgot about the platoon watching us. I cried myself to sleep in his arms as the rain soaked us both and washed away all the traces of blood. The last thing I remember was Jake kissing me on the cheek before I fell into a deeper sleep. I dreamt of Zak’s wondrous face coming up to mine as we kissed once again. Then he began to fade into distant memories. “NO! Don’t leave me!” I cried bursting once again into tears of sadness. Next thing I knew I was all by my lonesome. Alone in a dark wilderness of sorrow I looked around for a way out. Nothing but depressing forest surrounded me along with gunfire I could see my army falling before my silver eyes. Blood every where seeping from the shot down bodies of innocent men. Their souls drifting to the darkening sky never to come back.
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Post by Fl♥wingstar on Feb 6, 2007 17:41:37 GMT -5
Whoa...that was really good!
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Post by ~*~WolfShadow~*~ on Feb 7, 2007 16:22:15 GMT -5
I like it
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Post by Fl♥wingstar on Feb 7, 2007 16:36:53 GMT -5
Keep writing more!!!
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Post by ~*~WolfShadow~*~ on Feb 7, 2007 23:40:29 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Confessions I didn’t know what time it was when I heard Jake’s voice talking to some of the other men. I didn’t open my eyes I just listened closely to what he said. “ But I saved her from being captured and then she attacks me with a dagger?!” He asked stress filled his voice. “ Remember Jake she took a hit to the head. When you shot that one dude she probably thought you were an enemy as well.” A guy named Perry replied. “ Perry, I hope you’re right.” Jake said getting up. He came to where I lay and sat on the side of the cot and cupped his hand over my forehead. His hand was cold and it wasn’t because of the weather outside. “Nick honey, wake up please.” He pleaded silently. I opened my eyes to meet Jake’s soft face looking at me. “ How are you feeling?” He asked. “ Alright…I suppose,” I replied” where am I?” I asked since I didn’t know where I was. All I knew was that it was oh so cold. I didn’t shiver but I did smile and I also sat up. Jake put his hand behind my back for support. I looked at him my smile turning to a frown. How could I tell him about her and Zak? This she didn’t know, but she had to do something. “ You’re in your hooch.” Jake said looking at me. He had that worry face on that usually made me flinch surprisingly I didn’t flinch. That’s when he knew something was wrong. He didn’t ask he just got up and went outside into the winter cold. “Jake,” I called after him jumping from the cot and into my boots. I didn’t even grab my coat before going out.” Where are you going?” I asked desperately. He turned and still remained with that worry look on his gentle pale face. “ What are you doing out here without a coat?” He asked taking his off and placing it on me. “ I was just going for a smoke with some of the boys.” Was the answer to my question. It wasn’t the answer I was looking for because…since when did Jake smoke?! Oh my god this is going to be absolutely impossible to explain. I thought not taking my silver eyes off of his blue eyes. I tucked the jacket around me I wanted to collapse but I knew he would go nuts if I did. I remained in my stance hoping for something to draw me away. As we stood there I began shivering and of course Jake noticed and leaped into action. He took me by the shoulders and pushed me back into the hooch. I sighed and went without problems, I usually put a pretty good fight before falling in front of him and then outsmarting him. He sat me on my cot and went to fetch a blanket. Now I was annoyed and I had stopped shivering, but he was being very stubborn with me as usual. Ever since our divorce he had been more protective of me than I would have liked. I thought for a moment. Zak would never be that protective would he? This question burned in my mind for the time being until Jake came back a blanket in his hands. “ You know I wouldn’t be surprised if you got yourself killed,” He laughed gently” I mean you’re not like other girls who would hate to be out here.” “ So I like being out here, well not for the killing and all but you get what I mean.” I replied grinning only slightly. He only kissed me gently and then left me alone. I lay down and began thinking of ways to get Jake to stop being so stubborn. I watched as a small skinny mouse dared to cross my menacing path. I shooed it off not in the mood to torture the creature.
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Post by Fl♥wingstar on Feb 9, 2007 13:35:54 GMT -5
Wow!
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