Post by breathstar on Feb 18, 2007 13:20:35 GMT -5
Loving Twins
About the book.
It's about a young 11 year old girl.She is almost killed by her curl,father.Her name is Shantel but she likes to be called Julie or Milk and her curl father is,Fear.Her mother soon dies and she is left with him.........
It's about a young 11 year old girl.She is almost killed by her curl,father.Her name is Shantel but she likes to be called Julie or Milk and her curl father is,Fear.Her mother soon dies and she is left with him.........
Chapter 1
A storm roled overhead as a young girl walked to the coffie shop.Her father whated his coffie and she had to do it if she liked it or not.Her father had turned out to be a curl and bad father......now one liked him,not even her mother.But what could her mother do?The young girl had pretty long brown hair and pretty hazel eyes.She was a tomboy and she had lots of friends.Her name is Shantel but liked to be called Julie or Milk and she seemed to walk today reather then ran.Her heart seemed to be out of her cheast and her eyes were watching for an cop so she could tell them about her father.
"Milk?"A voice Julie new to well."Yes father?"She said turning to him."Get going!I what my coffie here in 5 min.You hear me!"Julie nodded and ran for the Coffie shop."I hope you remember my oder!"Her father screamed.She ran back and asked,"What is it again?"He smaked her and yelled at her,"A coffie thee suger three cream!Or do you what me to kill your mother?"She turned away yelling,"I'm going....i'm going." When she was on her way back she heared her Two sisters and two brothers ran up to her,"Pretty bad that Comet and Lizzie are his kids,Shantel?" Julie remembered her real name,"I'm called Julie Ryan."Her brother was named Ryan but they called him Rock...they called her two sisters the Ls and Comet.....Comet.
"I must go or dad will be mad."Julie said."Fear....Mr.Fear are you here?"she looked around and saw her mother racing for the door.She seemed to run right out and down the street with the Ls,Rock and Comet."Run dear!"Julie doped the coffie and ran after her mother.But the storm was growning and the wind hit her."Mom!" "Shantel!"Julie ran after the voice,"Mom!" But her mother's voice was gone.She left the street."Yeah Milk you here...your mother is lieing down and she tolded me that i'm the,how do you say it,Rule you and your sisters and brothers now." Julie looked at him and raced over to were her mother was."Mom?"Julie whispered....but her mother whispered back,"Be good and when you have the time,take the kids and run..........I ....Love...You...."She stop and was gone.Julie her sisters and brother turned there heads to the sky and screamed like one voice,"MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"